What Have I Wrought?

[bloodyrosemccoy]

Criminy. I decided to try making The Hive’s dialogue sound very deliberate and lexically-oriented.

Now it sounds like Rorschach.

This does give one the advantage of a creepy alien feel, but on the other hand I never thought of The Hive as a murderous vigilante with an absolute moral code. Morality is something it’s still working on grasping at all.

… Although … that would be terrifying. Maybe if I ever need a really, really scary villain …

Comments

[10cents.livejournal.com]

You know... I love The Hive to pieces exactly as it was when I read about it and I would be sad to see it change, but! That idea is SO AWESOME that I just might be able to deal with the loss.

I think that I am just destined to love The Hive no matter what happens. Please don't ever stop writing about it.

[padparadscha.livejournal.com]

Well, The Hive does have a long way to go before it understands other people. I suppose it's not inconceivable that somewhere along the way it could get what it's learned all wrong, or decide it's got a better idea.

Can you imagine trying to talk sense into a billion-strong being with a grudge? And Picard thought he had trouble with Q ...

[pandoras-closet.livejournal.com]

I once created a mad scientist who never used contractions and always had perfect grammar.

He was kind of unnerving, really. Which was sort of the point.

[gwalla.livejournal.com]

So, Danny from Nukees?