Had to wait a couple of days before I could give this the attention it deserved. Worth the wait. That was awesome!
I'm gonna have to go back and re-read the whole thing in one go soon. You're doing a good job of signalling the callbacks and such, but I still feel like there are some things I'm missing, characters I'm getting confused because I've read the bits too far apart. Probably a problem on my end, not yours.
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Date: 2013-10-31 02:13 am (UTC)I'm gonna have to go back and re-read the whole thing in one go soon. You're doing a good job of signalling the callbacks and such, but I still feel like there are some things I'm missing, characters I'm getting confused because I've read the bits too far apart. Probably a problem on my end, not yours.