Note To Author

[bloodyrosemccoy]

Dear James Clemens,

I appreciate that you do not want to make your world Sanitary Fantasy World, and I am even tremendously amused and intrigued by your made-up religion that focuses on gods’ bodily fluids and functions, since that’s pretty standard for religion and it’s entertaining to see it made literal in a place where gods are substantial. However, must you go on about effluvia so much? I am willing to accept one or two mentions to remind us that fantasy land does contain shit, but there’s a fine line between “realistic detail” and “just plain wallowing,” and that line is so far behind you that binoculars may not help you locate it.

Also, helpful tip: you do not endear yourself to me when the first time I meet a 13-year-old female protagonist she is being graphically raped. It sorta sets the tone for the rest of the book, if you know what I mean.

So, while your technical merit is pretty good, I’m afraid I’m going to have to return your book to the library unfinished. Because really.

Yours,
Amelia

Comments

[padparadscha.livejournal.com]

I think in a few cases it is. And no, I don't automatically disapprove of putting violence against female characters in stories, I do get suspicious when the author gets carried away enough that it becomes more than just part of the story. It's the difference between "This story requires this to happen" and "I HAVE MADE IT GRIMDARK! LET'S GET WITH THE ATROCITIES WHEE."