Oh, dude, no, I'm having entirely too much fun here. And if anything, the transition from snark to noir fits her sort of idunno descent/ascent/let's-call-it-an-evolution into her supervillianess state. And I LIKE that you called me on the kinky-wrong-sex thing. I get carried away some times. If you hadn't, I never would have thought the switch the POV for the sequel, which is going to be approx. > 9000 times better than if I'd kept the original POV.
If anything, I'm worried that my SRS BSNS might have bothered you. It's just that I love noir, but almost never write it because if you do it with the wrong story it's just awful, and awful noir is, um, Frank Miller. Calling my writing like Miller's if Miller could write is one of the more awesome compliments I've gotten.
Anyway, I'm going to try to be online this evening, but anyway please to send me what you have when you have it. And there's other stuff I want to say, I think, but I can't remember it now (darn short-term memory loss) and anyway I have to go to a sailing lesson. Later!
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If anything, I'm worried that my SRS BSNS might have bothered you. It's just that I love noir, but almost never write it because if you do it with the wrong story it's just awful, and awful noir is, um, Frank Miller. Calling my writing like Miller's if Miller could write is one of the more awesome compliments I've gotten.
Anyway, I'm going to try to be online this evening, but anyway please to send me what you have when you have it. And there's other stuff I want to say, I think, but I can't remember it now (darn short-term memory loss) and anyway I have to go to a sailing lesson. Later!